ZombieRufus
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 | Subject: Zombie Rufus' Charecter~  Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:09 pm | |
| Name:Dylan Castellar
Alias: Seth Costello
Age: 14
Birthday: 18/06
Half Birthday:18/03
Grade:9th
Years at the Hideout: none. He's kinda new here.
Parent Star, or Parent Planet: Kaus Australis, brightest star in Saggitarius~
Appearance: raven-black hair, which is long-ish for a boy and has red tips, ruby eyes, and he's thinly built, around about 5"7 in height. He is pretty emo, and usually dresses in dark clothes and green converse. He's got pale skin with freckles.
Personality: He's pretty moody and depressed, due to the lack of his parent star, whgich has had quite an effect on him. He can sometimes restrain from biting your head off and enjoys himself, but those days are few and far between.
Flaw: He has anger issues, and has to be restrained from beating people up on a pretty much daily basis.
*Other: He's -almost- murdered someone before. Also, most of his friends and enemies know him as Devil Spawn, due to the fact he is pretty evil.
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Miss%Maureen
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| | Subject: Re: Zombie Rufus' Charecter~ Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:25 pm | |
| Very nice charrie. I love the personality build of him. I just have a few remarks.
1)The Hideout hasn't been around for 7 years, only about 8 months.
2)You might consider changing his alias because in RPing, it wont seem like a very real name. Maybe you can have that be his nickname but his alias be something more realistic? Just a thought.
3)I am very confused about his birthday. Are you writing the day and then the month? And if that is the case, you would have to put 18/06, and then his half birthday would be 18/03. So that the month is the only thing that changes, but the day stays the same.
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ZombieRufus
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Location : Somewhere you're not... Unless you know me... Then we're in the same place... x]
| | Subject: Re: Zombie Rufus' Charecter~ Fri Nov 12, 2010 1:10 pm | |
| Opp i've worked out all the bugs... Thanks for helping me...~Rufus | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zombie Rufus' Charecter~ Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:12 pm | |
| Great! Im still a little confused about the birthday, but I guess it makes sense to you. xD
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ZombieRufus
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| | Subject: Re: Zombie Rufus' Charecter~ Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:05 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Zombie Rufus' Charecter~ Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:34 pm | |
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